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Monday, February 22, 2010

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alrite so this story is REALLY REALLY bad and wtf?!?! haahha. For detail i got too much homework, for settings i got a girls dorm and for character i got a woman who keeps poisonous snakes as pets. Remember now i just wrote, no time for planinng ahah its bad i know lol

In a small town not far from the city, there was a boy named Rick and he was 12. He missed his older sister Susan because she had gone off to college and she was his best friend. Every week Rick; with the help of his mom, would send her care packages filled with cookies and cards. Rick was a good student at school, and this year his class was going to go visit a college; his sister’s college. Rick was so happy that he could visit his sister that he called her with the news. She was also ecstatic but warned Rick that no matter what he better not go into her room when she is not around because she has too much homework laying on her desk. She knew Rick likes to touch things, so it was a good point. When the field trip day came, Rick told his teacher that he would be spending the night at a girl’s dorm room instead of the hotel like every other kid. The teacher looked puzzled but then remembered Rick had an older sister who went there and agreed. When the kids got to the campus, they spent the entire day going to fun events and ate at the dining halls. Susan came up to Rick when she saw him touring the college store with his group and gave him a big hug. Rick didn’t like hugs from her in front of all her friends but he was ok with it since he did miss her. She told him that she would pick him ujp from the hotel at 6pm and already discussed it with his teacher. When 6 o clock came, she did just that. She showed him the dorm building she stayed in and some of her hall mates. He was so curious as to what the girls rooms would look like he was also happy with all the attention he got. Then after 2 hours of socializing, he asked Susan about her roommate. Susan paused and said she was different than the girls they were used to back at home. Rick thought nothing of it and just shrugged. When midnight came, the two of them were walking to her dorm, but Susan wanted to grab something from the vending machine. She told Rick to stay put in front of her room until she came to open it. Rick agreed but wondered why he couldn’t just wait inside of her room. So when susan left for 45 seconds Rick just decided to barge in. As susan walked through the hall, she saw rick screaming and running. Behind him was a poisonous snake and rick jumped onto Susan and Susan hissed at the snake. The snake made an immediate stop. She then told Rick that her roommate was a woman who keeps poisonous snakes as pets. She said don’t worry they’re trained. Rex just wanted to play.

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